Human-reviewed story diagnostics for xianxia and progression fantasy authors
Start with a free browser-based check, then upgrade to structured human feedback on your blurb, opening, or next chapter plan before you launch on Royal Road, Scribble Hub, or Kindle.
How It Works
Start With Free Checks
Paste your blurb, character names, sect/technique names, and cultivation realms for an instant rule-based scan.
Get Instant Scores
Hook Score, Authenticity Risk, ClichΓ© Risk, Name Confusion, and Platform Fit β all at a glance.
Pick the Right Report
Choose a quick blurb audit, deep opening review, or next-chapter stress test for an in-progress serial.
Get Human Feedback
Receive a concise PDF or Markdown report with continuity risks, reader-confusion points, and concrete fixes.
What It Checks
Name Authenticity
Flags names that violate pinyin rules, sound machine-generated, or use letters that don't exist in Chinese romanization.
Pinyin Confusion
Detects character names that Western readers will mix up β like Li/Liu/Lin, Xiao/Xia, or Chen/Cheng appearing in the same cast.
ClichΓ© Overload
Counts overused tropes: "heaven-defying," "jade beauty," "arrogant young master," "once a trash" β and tells you how to replace them.
Sect & Realm Naming
Catches "Flame Dragon Sect" and other machine-translation patterns. Checks if your cultivation tiers are satisfying.
Platform Fit
Tailored advice for Royal Road, Scribble Hub, or Amazon β each platform has different reader expectations.
Next Chapter Stress Test
Checks whether your next chapter naturally follows, pays off reader expectations, and avoids pacing or continuity drift.
Writing the next chapter?
Use the free checker for surface issues, or request a $29 stress test when you need continuity, pacing, and reader-promise feedback before drafting.