Free Xianxia / Progression Fantasy Blurb Audit Beta
I am testing a small audit workflow from a Chinese web novel reader's perspective. It is built for authors writing cultivation-inspired progression fantasy, xianxia, wuxia, or LitRPG with cultivation elements.
What the beta checks
Opening hook
Does the blurb quickly show the protagonist, pressure, promise, and reason to keep reading?
Progression clarity
Are the realms, ranks, system, or power gains easy for genre readers to understand?
Xianxia feel
Do the names, sects, techniques, conflicts, and breakthrough moments feel natural or machine-translated?
Next-chapter fit
For in-progress serials, does the next planned chapter follow the reader promise without forcing the plot?
How the beta works
Send a short sample
Use the email link with your story title, target platform, blurb, and optional opening sample link.
Get focused feedback
I will check the piece from a Chinese web novel reader's perspective and point out the clearest fixes.
Decide later
The beta is free. Paid follow-ups are optional: Quick Audit, Deep Audit, or the $29 Next Chapter Stress Test.
Request a free beta audit
Best for authors with a blurb, synopsis, cultivation system, name list, opening sample, or early next-chapter concern ready to review.
Request a Free Beta Audit →No payment link. No upload form. Just email, so you control what you share. Public case studies only use anonymized material with permission.