Free Xianxia / Progression Fantasy Blurb Audit Beta
I am testing a small audit checklist from a Chinese web novel reader's perspective. It is built for authors writing cultivation-inspired progression fantasy, xianxia, wuxia, or LitRPG with cultivation elements.
What the beta checks
Opening hook
Does the blurb quickly show the protagonist, pressure, promise, and reason to keep reading?
Progression clarity
Are the realms, ranks, system, or power gains easy for genre readers to understand?
Xianxia feel
Do the names, sects, techniques, conflicts, and breakthrough moments feel natural or machine-translated?
Reader fit
Does the pitch speak to Royal Road, Scribble Hub, Kindle, or LitRPG readers without overexplaining?
How the beta works
Send a short sample
Use the email link with your story title, target platform, blurb, and optional opening sample link.
Get focused feedback
I will check the piece from a Chinese web novel reader's perspective and point out the clearest fixes.
Decide later
The beta is free. Paid audits are optional follow-ups after you see whether the feedback is useful.
Request a free beta audit
Best for authors with a blurb, synopsis, cultivation system, name list, or first-chapter opening ready to review.
Request a Free Beta Audit →No payment link. No upload form. Just email, so you control what you share.